Tuesday, February 5, 2008

JA Revision

I revised the very rough Johnny Astronaut a little from last post, here's the new one.

Next stop, Outer Borzoi!

shuttle Aquari flames on toenails

Back on Aquari Ptsaurians who

turned out neither dead nor

hot-foot dirty leave Pts.

family

issues among the formerly dead

(stepping back for what Aquari)

[stayed Aquari of my livelihood]

{that Charvez had sent me a telegram

Aquari}; had finally come in

and my office would be considerable

- because planned ponies at Clinton

Downs pull into bolted line and

grin through plastic teeth aside

the treatment

getting late, past

suckers at claim learn light

gams entering twin Johnny Astronaut

friend, "friend", a better word

slumming out of vogue (lemon at a loss)

Martha affect Johnny through crocodile

grin.

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